27 September 2009 @ 07:12 pm
fanfic  
I started playing TWEWY again, mostly because the one 'level 2' for a Pig Noise in the Noise List was driving me crazy. It was like, the mar on my otherwise perfect record XD So I replayed. And then I wrote this.

Title: Welcome to Sunshine!
Chapter: 1/1 (oneshot)
Fandom: The World Ends With You
Character/Pairing: Shigemi Konno, Sunshine Shibukyu Girl!
Rating: E for Everyone =D
Summary: Shigemi Konno deliberates as the nameless guy in headphones makes his order.
Notes: I'm sorry, I like to write fanfiction about super minor characters.

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One sentence. That's all it'd take. It's not like I don't speak all the time for work anyway, so why is it so hard for me to speak out now? It's like I've been programmed to say 'Welcome to Sunshine!' and nothing else. The smile on my face is wide, for the purpose of, as our motto goes, 'bringing sunshine to your day!', but inside I'm a complete mess.

I have a feeling that my face isn't warm just from the heat of the kitchen.

I don't even know his name, though it's not like he knows mine either. He's been coming around pretty often lately. I'd like to think that he has an ulterior motive - that he wants something besides the food - but I heard from Rikako that he's been popping by Sunshine Stationside a lot too.

She has a picture of him on her phone. I have absolutely no idea when she found time to take it without him noticing, and when she showed me I immediately rebuked her for doing something so bold.

She laughed and told me that I was just jealous.

I could tell him my name, maybe. 'I'm Shigemi Konno, here to take your order!' Would that be too peppy? Or too weird, since I've never mentioned my name before? And it's not like he'd tell me his name in return either.

It'd only take one sentence to ask him out.

But I'd just seem like a total stalker, asking him out all of a sudden. Or like, one of those crazy girls who fall in love at first sight with the first pretty stranger they meet on the street. I mean, who asks out people they meet at fast-food restaurants?

I don't even know his name.

And I hand him his fries, saying, 'Here's your order!' He takes it wordlessly, his eyes intent on the fries. He never eats right after paying. Maybe he's buying it for his girlfriend, who's probably really pretty and outgoing like Rikako. They probably go shopping together, and he ends up paying for his girlfriend's clothes even though she always protests.

He turns around to leave, so I say, 'Thanks! I'll see you soon!' Even that feels bold (did it sound a bit desperate?), and my throat feels tight - I can't say anything else. My mind's screaming. Just ask him out! Strike a conversation! Say something, anything, to keep him from stepping through the door back onto the street.

But he's gone already. Who knows when I'll see him next - if he moved away, I wouldn't even know. If he got into a freak accident, I'd never be notified - and why would I be? I'm just the girl at Sunshine Shibukyu who has a debilitating crush on this guy she doesn't even know.

'Miss?'

Another customer's come in already. I smile as widely as I can, and say cheerfully, 'Welcome to Sunshine!'

Maybe I'll ask him out next time.

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In the alternative ending she goes after him and then can't find him in the crowd what with his being in the UG and is completely dejected because even when she tries things never work out for her. n____n

Should be doing research for school instead but really can't stop playing TWEWY and getting all the shopkeepers to love me 8D Why is the DS such a wonderfully portable device?
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une_insomniaque[info]une_insomniaque on September 27th, 2009 11:54 pm (UTC)
I find this completely and utterly amazing. <3 No, seriously -- I love that you wrote this. I thought I was the only one who geeked out over the shopkeepers and everything! I'd so love to see more stories like this~ :D Love it, thanks for sharing!
awin: mayamaid[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:10 am (UTC)
Yes, yes, the shopkeepers! XD I love how TWEWY actually gave personalities to all of them~~. And it's great how so many of them have the hots for Neku. 8D. Thank you for commenting! n__n
nessa: ohno[info]fluidcomplexity on September 28th, 2009 12:26 am (UTC)
If I had more time on my hands than like my epic fail of time management, spending all my time transcribing music instead of realizing I have a bio quiz to study for, I'd give you a better review thingy, but you gotta write one for each store now. :D
awin: an ersatz introduction[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:35 am (UTC)
This brings to question - what the heck are you doing here if you should be studying for bio? XDDD And go! Do it now! Study XD

...And I don't know, maybe XD I have ideas for other shops... but I found all of the Mus Rattus people rather boring. (Then again there is Masuoka, the one at Le Grand who totally flirts with Neku >_> The sketchy one. And there is Makoto/Mick who thinks Neku's totally flirting with him. XDDD)
nessa: forgotten tamaki[info]fluidcomplexity on September 28th, 2009 02:00 am (UTC)
Taking a break now XD

OH PLEASE DO ONE WITH MAKOTO. That guy honestly made me laugh so so hard...
awin: always charming[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:21 pm (UTC)
...XDDD Fine, fine, I guess.

And yes, doesn't he? XD I don't know. His whole character change from like, lame guy to this slick creep back to lame guy was just awesome 8D In Another Day I love him so much.
thano: yay[info]thano on September 28th, 2009 12:34 am (UTC)
cutest fic in this fandom, ever
awin: a different point of view[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:46 am (UTC)
n___n I'm glad you liked it and oh my Hermes, the Allen icon *___*. Thanks for the comment!
1angelette: Leonard Penny Salt[info]1angelette on September 28th, 2009 01:08 am (UTC)
There is NO SUCH THING as too much shopkeepgirl fic. Moarplz! The angst was beautiful...
awin: a different point of view[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:22 pm (UTC)
Aw, I'm glad you liked it =DDD And oh my Hermes your icon *____* Big Bang Theory is love.
Azalee: twewy group[info]azalee_calypso on September 28th, 2009 06:02 am (UTC)
LOVE FOR THE SHOPKEEPERS !! :DD
Seriously, that was so cute and err, IC I guess with what we know of her - oh Hell, I just adore the idea and you did it wonderfully.
And thus I totally second (third ? fourth ?) the begging for MOAR SHOPKEEPERS FIC.
(masuokaaa ! makotoooooo !! kyo the skater guy who thinks "noooo !!" when you go and that one chick from the really expensive store that thinks of you as a kid but still gets the hugest crush on you !! PRINCESS K !!)
awin: don't let the smile deceive you[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:20 pm (UTC)
Yes, yes 8D More love for the lovely shopkeepers of TWEWY.

And yay I'm glad you liked it =DD And I think I will. Sometime. Maybe. Because Makoto is awesome and yes, the lady from Bel Airplane (her name escapes me right now) and Princess K is just so charming~~.

Thank you for the comment!
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 28th, 2009 11:18 am (UTC)
I have never played TWEwhut before. XDD

I swear my mind's been corrupted by Connie - I thought 'she' was a guy at first. XDDD

It's awesomely cute, nee-chan~
awin[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 12:19 pm (UTC)
Oh, it's The World Ends With You, on the DS? Rather brilliant - you shuold play it if you get the chance =P

And wow, Kura, reeeeally. XD I mean not everything I write has to be BL.

Thank you n____n
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 28th, 2009 12:37 pm (UTC)
XD I would, but I don't have a DS.

XDD But 90% of my friends write BL!

No problem~~~ :D
awin: shizuma is a cute chibi[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 08:12 pm (UTC)
Ah, that's too bad - could you like, borrow from somebody who does? (Or well, DS Lites are going for pretty cheap nowadays~~. n___n)

Yeah but still they can write other things XDD
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 28th, 2009 09:47 pm (UTC)
XDD My class uses PSPs instead.

have you ever seen Connie write anything other than BL? XD"
awin[info]sidevocalist on September 28th, 2009 11:12 pm (UTC)
...Ah well I have one of those too 8DDDD

And well how about your other friends like ... like ... okay, so all the examples I'm coming up with are strictly slash writers but that doesn't mean that you should immediately assume that what you're reading is slash. XD
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 29th, 2009 09:25 am (UTC)
but 99% of what I read is slash /fails/
awin: a different point of view[info]sidevocalist on September 29th, 2009 08:59 pm (UTC)
Yeah well that's your problem I think~~. 8D And wow, ninety-nine? I'm assuming the remaining one percent if het, not femslash XD
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 29th, 2009 09:43 pm (UTC)
I mean the material I read online. And yes, the minority is het. I write het, nee-chan. DX
awin: nick![info]sidevocalist on September 29th, 2009 09:51 pm (UTC)
Oh, I See. And ... well just 'cause you write it doesn't mean you reeeead it XD I never know. And well sometimes femslash is good right? >_>
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 29th, 2009 09:53 pm (UTC)
I don't read femslash. At least, not often. XDD
awin: a smoker does not a good doctor make[info]sidevocalist on September 29th, 2009 10:36 pm (UTC)
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<s><Neither do I, most of the time but sometimes it's inevitable~~. =D And well I think femslash is fun to write anyhow 8D</s>
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 30th, 2009 10:06 am (UTC)
XD I have never tried femslash before~
awin: it's larry time![info]sidevocalist on September 30th, 2009 07:59 pm (UTC)
Ooh, really? 0___o You should then! XD It's ... well, I find the dynamics are usually very interesting~. (Though in some fandoms it's hard to find enough girls to actually even make a femslash pair. ._.)
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on September 30th, 2009 09:57 pm (UTC)
(this. XDDDD)
awin: ...are you serious?[info]sidevocalist on October 1st, 2009 12:12 am (UTC)
Well it's totally true! I mean look at tenipuri and its however many boys and what, three truly pairable girls? >_> Unless we're going for ilke Ryuzaki the elder too.
ケリー[info]sono_kiseki on October 1st, 2009 08:47 am (UTC)
XDDDDDDDDD
Taimat: David/Rush[info]taimat on October 1st, 2009 04:05 am (UTC)
This. is. awesome.

Seriously. Don't you dare apologize! *shakes fist*

It's lovely to see things from a point of view other than that of the main characters now and again, and this is very well done. :)

...and I love getting the shopkeepers to love me, too. I feel so popular! XD

*totally jumping on the MOAR SHOPKEEPER bandwagon*
awin: a smoker does not a good doctor make[info]sidevocalist on October 1st, 2009 07:52 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the comment =DDD And yes, yes, the shopkeepers are too wonderful~. Like, Dr Fumiko is just awesome and such~.

And I probably will write more. XD If I remember. Once I'm not so busy.
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